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Water Unicorn

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This is birthday gift for my friend ^^
Hope you like it, this time no fire ;)

Please, be nice while commenting it's anatomy, I know I suck at horses but I'm still trying and think that's quite good :)

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Ink, Ecoline

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I do commissions like this! ;)
Image size
1200x847px 1.18 MB
Make
Canon
Model
MP550 series
© 2011 - 2024 Natoli
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AngHuiQing's avatar
Aw man I was looking up different textures to see what I could do with it when this caught my attention. I really like the textures! Especially the bubbles.

You seem open to critique on the anatomy too, so here's my two cents. ^^ I don't know if it was intentional, but I noticed that the unicorn's hooves are actually more like a deer's than a horses because it's split in two. The shoulder/base neck area of a horse is generally not so thick too. The're more lean. You could also make the head more horse-like (if that is your intention) by giving it less of a thicker eyebrow. They don't have very pronounced brows but they do have pronounced chins. :) If the unicorn is jumping, it would help if you raised the front legs more and is the unicorn is trotting/running, it'd help if the head was raised higher. Looking at the process of a horse running/jumping can be useful! :)

I hope I didn't bombard you with too much. You seem to like critique so I apologize if this is too much. ^^; Just wanted to add that I like the pen shading and the tail too!